click here to read the story of zoroastrian migration here is the link
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My Historical Fiction
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Here is the link for my migration historical fiction. This story is about India and British war in 1941. If you have feedback please co...
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This is my Migration Story EQ (Digital story). Here is my Migration Story in Google Drive. Hope you like it 😉😜
Great job! I liked how you used good word expression and word choice
ReplyDeleteI liked how added many details.For example, how the place look or how they felt. It made me imagine that I'm there. also,I think it was very great idea to put the real picture. I wonder where have they taken the picture.
ReplyDeleteI think what you can do to make your wonderful piece to more wonderful is to add more dialogue in the story. when you do that, the story will be interesting!
I think it was a very great migration story💕