click here to read the story of zoroastrian migration here is the link
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Click here to read my Digital story
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Here is my historical fiction story that I asked my grandmother about my great-great grandparents from Kyoto and Kobe. I hope you enjoy it...
Great job! I liked how you used good word expression and word choice
ReplyDeleteI liked how added many details.For example, how the place look or how they felt. It made me imagine that I'm there. also,I think it was very great idea to put the real picture. I wonder where have they taken the picture.
ReplyDeleteI think what you can do to make your wonderful piece to more wonderful is to add more dialogue in the story. when you do that, the story will be interesting!
I think it was a very great migration story💕