Here is the link for my migration historical fiction. This story is about India and British war in 1941. If you have feedback please comment. Hope you enjoy reading my story.
I really liked your story, One thing I liked is that you added a lot of detail. Another thing I liked is that the pictures matched the time period and were nice.
I liked your story telling voice, and the sensory details. Something you should add to your story is description for example when you said about the Mosque give more details about the Mosque. Epic!
I really liked your story, One thing I liked is that you added a lot of detail. Another thing I liked is that the pictures matched the time period and were nice.
ReplyDeleteGreat digital story I was really sucked into the book
ReplyDeleteI think something you could do better is record somewhere private
ReplyDeleteAdd a bit more historical detail
ReplyDeleteI liked your story telling voice, and the sensory details.
ReplyDeleteSomething you should add to your story is description for example when you said about the Mosque give more details about the Mosque.
Epic!