I liked that you got music and sounds when you were recording and I liked that you had many details and made the pictures really match good.
I like the way you used onomatopoeia when the soldiers were attacking the cars. It made it sound so cool😊. Something that you could work on is describing the setting more(the forest, London or things like that).
it was veery funny you added so much historical details the sound effaces were amazing i could tell you put a lot of work in to it.
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I liked that you got music and sounds when you were recording and I liked that you had many details and made the pictures really match good.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used onomatopoeia when the soldiers were attacking the cars. It made it sound so cool😊. Something that you could work on is describing the setting more(the forest, London or things like that).
ReplyDeleteit was veery funny you added so much historical details the sound effaces were amazing i could tell you put a lot of work in to it.
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