I like how you put some details about the place and the knife.
I like how you added detal
I really liked your sensory detail which was I fell into tears, another thing I liked was the images which matched the time period.
I really like the way you described the train and what happened on it.And you added a lot of details.
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I like how you put some details about the place and the knife.
ReplyDeleteI like how you added detal
ReplyDeleteI really liked your sensory detail which was I fell into tears, another thing I liked was the images which matched the time period.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you described the train and what happened on it.
ReplyDeleteAnd you added a lot of details.