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Here is my historical fiction story that I asked my grandmother about my great-great grandparents from Kyoto and Kobe. I hope you enjoy it...
Dear Zahaan,
ReplyDeleteI loved how you used different scenes and images to make your story more exciting and interactive
Sorry Zahaan, that was me above commenting. Just saying, you had a smooth story with a lot of interactions.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you used sound effects when the storm came in the ocean, you spoke very fluently when you recorded. Something you might work on is recording somewhere there is not so much background noise so we can hear your voice.
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