I liked how you added different voices in the story so you would now that the other person was speaking. I also liked how all of the characters and the author (Who was Ruth) said Liberty For All together. It showed that all the characters were happy for their Liberty. One thing I suggest for you is to find a more quite place because I could hear horns honking and it was a bit hard to listen to.
I liked how you added different voices in the story so you would now that the other person was speaking. I also liked how all of the characters and the author (Who was Ruth) said Liberty For All together. It showed that all the characters were happy for their Liberty. One thing I suggest for you is to find a more quite place because I could hear horns honking and it was a bit hard to listen to.
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