Thursday, January 31, 2019

poppys migration story

Here is my digital story. 

If you want to here is my story on a google doc.

                         


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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 31, 2019 at 9:46 PM

    HF2 comment= Hi I really liked the ending because it was like life just moved on and that was a nice aspect

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 31, 2019 at 10:50 PM

    I like how you made the sequence of events flow nicely by adding time phrases like'In the Guangzhou station and Eleven days had past' One suggestion for you is to use more punctuation.

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