Here is the link to my migration story. Hope you enjoy the story!
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Here is my historical fiction story that I asked my grandmother about my great-great grandparents from Kyoto and Kobe. I hope you enjoy it...
the story was very interesting. the pictures are good.
ReplyDeleteYou had very good plot but the adio needs a little work.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you record with exclamation. It was easy for me to understand what was going on in the story. also,I liked how you add great fitting pictures in each page.
ReplyDeleteone thing that you can work on is that you can add sensory details. If you do that your great piece will get more great!
I think that story was very nice and descriptiveđź’•đź’•