Here is a link to my Historical fiction. If you would like to listen to me reading the book there is a button which looks like a sound button, if you click on that you will be able to listen to me read to you. I would like you to give my feedback on my book so I can improve my writing. My father migrated from India to America. I hope you enjoy my book!
I really liked your story. especially how clear your voice was.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the story because of many things but the thing that i enjoyed the most was that your vocabulary was very strong and really helped me understand the story.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you used dialogue to enhance your story. You spoke clearly and I could understand you very well. Keep up the great work!
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