i really liked the way you talked like a real writer does and you have many interesting facts and i got very surprised cause it was really interesting.
I think you could have added more facts instead of "Shell shockers rule" and hail Jean and a good thing you did, is that you added a lot of humour in your work.
i really liked the way you talked like a real writer does and you have many interesting facts and i got very surprised cause it was really interesting.
ReplyDeleteI think you could have added more facts instead of "Shell shockers rule" and hail Jean and a good thing you did, is that you added a lot of humour in your work.
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