As a writer, I noticed that your introduction hooked me because, you started with a big fact about what Platypuses is. I thought you starting was good because I never knew what was a Platypuses. Something that I learned from your writing is that Platypuses are more active in the night. Also I learned that sometimes venom can kill a dog.
As a writer, I noticed that your introduction hooked me because, you started with a big fact about what Platypuses is. I thought you starting was good because I never knew what was a Platypuses.
ReplyDeleteSomething that I learned from your writing is that Platypuses are more active in the night. Also I learned that sometimes venom can kill a dog.
I like the picture and read your NF essay. l never knew venom can kill a dog .This is very good.
ReplyDelete