This historical fiction piece is about the migration story of my Grand Mother's friend's Migration story. It is about the partition of India and Pakistan. Hope you enjoy! Here is the link to my story.
1. The photo credits (unless the photos are all yours) 2. Your expression because when I heard the part when you were saying the father died, you seemed happy 3. Some more historical setting details 4. Spelling 5. Background noise
I liked how you showed so much emotion in the story
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ReplyDelete1. The photo credits (unless the photos are all yours)
ReplyDelete2. Your expression because when I heard the part when you were saying the father died, you seemed happy
3. Some more historical setting details
4. Spelling
5. Background noise