I loved your writing it has so much infromation I realy liked your diagram because it showed the insides of the cheetah.somthing I learned was that would happen without its strong legs- Aadith
i like your wrihing nice world choice i get to know more about cheetha . it was wondurful
I liked how you added a lots of info.I liked your word choice.Yuumi
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I loved your writing it has so much infromation
ReplyDeleteI realy liked your diagram because it showed the insides of the cheetah.
somthing I learned was that would happen without its strong legs
- Aadith
i like your wrihing nice world choice i get to know more about cheetha . it was wondurful
ReplyDeleteI liked how you added a lots of info.
ReplyDeleteI liked your word choice.
Yuumi